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Kylie

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PostSubject: Self control   Self control Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 6:27 am

I recently met a poet who told me that the way to best tackle a feeling is to put it into the form of a poem.......so one night when i couldnt sleep i decided to give it a go......and this is what i came up with!! tell me what u think:

Self control by Shanna

Needing, wanting
Constantly requiring more,
Yet do I really need it?
I don't know I'm not really sure

The desire that builds up inside,
Unrelenting, Unquenchable,
I see, I want, I need,
I give in, to the inevitable

And so like a piece of glass,
I crack, i break
My self control shattered to pieces,
Leaving only regret in its wake!
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PostSubject: Re: Self control   Self control Icon_minitimeSat Mar 28, 2009 1:17 am

thats a good one shanna Very Happy

oh n yeah if you've read mine you can tell that i'm really into wolves bigtime Razz

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